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This is my college admissions essay. It′s somewhat long and I′d like it to be shortened to the 550-word count if possible. Also, I do not mind AT ALL if you reorganize things to make sense, subtract, add whatever you need to do to make the readers cry. Please do it. Make the admissions officers cry and share with friends and family. I′ll provide extra info about my work if necessary as well. The underlined text is taken from an excerpt by The Huntington called ″The Newton You Didn′t Know″ Please rephrase so that it′s not plagiarized.