Writing Improvement Exercise: Eliminating Redundancies
Revise the following sentences to avoid redundancies.
a. We will let you know the dollar amount of the remodeling charges.
b. The office walls were painted beige in color.
c. Team members asked to return back to the office.
d. The proposal is so complete that we need not alter or change a thing.
e. A great majority of investors favored the proposed new changes.